Music

Music is happiness,
Music is sadness,
Music is loneliness,
Music is gladness.

Music is loud,
Music is anything,
Music is soft,
Music is everything.

Music is love,
Music is hate,
Music is life ,
Music is great.

Music is whatever you want it to be.

Nice, you portrayed music is very well. I quite love your last sentence, i absolutely agree with it. Makes me wonder why I haven't written a poem about music yet. The rhyming pattern isn't bad and nor are the words you use. In general it's a good poem but it very simple, almost to simple so therefore it cannot be great. I've seen many poems like this. But yours is quite good use it as a learning experience do something out of your comfort zone next! expand yourself!


Great work!

Hey there,
This is as cute as ever. Brightening my day seems to be your speciality. Bravo! Keep writing!!
xxx Upile xxx

I like it. If I could offer any advice at all it would be to expand on what you already have. I think you could make something really great out of this. It is a nice little poem though. It works fine on its own, but like I said, something longer with the same idea could be great.

-Liz

Awh, this is what I think of music too. ^.^
Keep writing and I'm sure you'll improve even further.