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I sat on the hill,
waiting...
Wind whirled through the leaves,
of the trees
the birds came,
The sun sat in the distance,
slowly setting.
I looked around
and sighed.
She was coming back?
No.
Seven this morning,
she was coming home;
or so we thought.
Now nine at night.
She never came back,
maybe I'll me her before she meets me;
past the seas and through the clouds?
I sat up, then removed my shirt,
set it upon the ground beneath me.
Lying down,
the sun set it's final rays across my nude chest.
The warmth it gave me reminded me of her;
her arms wrapped tight around me...
The soft lips that would touch mine...
A tongue of sorts licked my cheek,
Opening my eyes, I saw not my love,
but a companion,
my dog.
We sat, and waited.
And she came.
Bare feet ran up the hill,
I looked toward its origin.
And there she was, my love.
We hugged and kissed.
My buddy leaped at us,
Jealous perhaps!
We sat and watched the sunset fall below the horizon.
Here the day was ending, but somewhere,
it had just began.
We talked, my dog at my side.
Rain fell at the last light,
a calm noise in the leaves.
All three of us cuddled together;
Awaiting a future tomorrow (I think this fits better, what do you think?)
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In your reviews, not only critique, but the one thing I really would like to know is your emotions. Tell me the atmosphere you get, the "distance" of the sounds, are they near you, or in a faraway distant land? This isn't that emotion packed I guess, but just bear with me, thanks!
It is nothing special, and it doesn't portray my feelings at all. If it portrayed my feelings(and thoughts), you would have nightmares and I'd be put in a mental hospital!
Not to mention you'd be utterly baffled. 
