I dont find anything sarcastic or worth being sarcastic about. I think this is beautiful, graphic, but beautiful. Some people might cringe at reading this because of how it is, but to me its just. Amazing. You really did well. I think once or something you spelled a word wrong, like you said ad instead of and. But no worries. I'm counting on reading the rest of this.
"And when you're out there, without care, yeah, I was out of touch! But it wasn't because I didn't know enough, I just knew too much."
