Hello!

Hello everyone!

I thought that I would introduce myself and tell you more about my novel etc..

Me- I am home-schooled, and yes I go to classes and NO I do not get to wear my PJ's all day even though I could most days I just prefer my jeans and horse T-Shirt better lol! I am only 15 and I will be graduating High school next year, I am a Christian and I love to read, write, and ride horses! I have 4 horses and one on the way, I have 3 dogs, 2 cats, and a bird. I do natural horsemanship and I do whatever is best for the horse. I have been riding since I could walk and I have tried a lot of different sports but none compare to horses. I have tried softball, basketball, soccer, gymnastics, fencing(sword fighting), and tennis. My favorite classes are Art and World View and Anatomy. I am planning on becoming a horse trainer, breeder, and a equine vet specializing in stud farms. I have a facebook and no I do not accept all friend requests unless you are one of my truest and best friends which I am proud to say that I have far to many to count.

My Novel- Well I started writing this novel when I was 14, but it just did not work out as I had hoped, the characters names were generic and well to be honest the story line sucked! I have begun the task of rewriting it 6 months ago and I now have 17 complete chapters! It was based off of a really bad dream I had once, which is the first page of the book it is the dream of one of my characters...and it leads him on a incredible journey, he finds a girl in the forest who lost her memory and has a terrible secret, a man who's brother was taken,a forbidden love, and a daughter and a son who's father is a murderous powerful man who cannot be killed unless he is stabbed with a certain type of blade and there is only one of those around, which my character happens to have, but my villain has special abilities that makes him exceedingly difficult to kill or get close to for that matter. Anyways this all forms together and I don't know exactly how it will end since my fingers have taken me on this incredible journey into a world so vast I don't even know how big it is!

if you would like to read it please email me at crosswoodacres@yahoo.com or go to my website called thesavvygirlswritingclub.webs.com

Keep writing!

Hello and welcome,
Your novel sounds great. I'll be ready to see it posted if it isn't already. You'll find that most of us are pretty helpful around here with grammar and plot flow or whatever you need really. I'm afraid I'm not sure what to say now. I suppose I can tell you that I am also a christian and love to read and write. Though I have never ridden a horse and am quite frightened by the aspect of sitting on top of one. I have an aunt who has family in Texas...
Okay, well, I hope you have a wonderful YWS experience and that you get some feedback on your novel. If you ever feel that you're lacking in reviews, just tell me, and I'll be happy to read it.
Megsug

Hey, there! =D

So it's been a whole day since you've joined! How's it going for you? Are you finding everything okay? I see you've already started reviewing, which is absolutely wonderful!

I have a couple friends who also rode horses. They're really neat, and since my sister just loves horses, I've picked up random facts about them. XD They're really fun to watch though. We even went to a Lipizzaner show once. That was really exciting! You horse riders go through a lot though when it comes to training and competition. Have you done competitions? If so, what are they like?

I remember one of my favorite books at first was about horses. It was amazing! I just can't remember what it was called. xD But it was my first book checked out from the new library when we moved. *checkpoint in life*

Your novel sounds very interesting! Fantasy stories like what your novel sounds like interest me a lot. Do you write anything else? Like when you're sick of writing your novel, do you dabble in short stories or poetry?

I'll see you around the site. Have fun!

~ Jabber

Wow! That sounds like a really good story! I'm new hear and I'd love to have a friend on this site. Maybe we could halp each other with our stories and plots, I sure could do with some help! xD

Welcome to the site.

You'll really love it here. If you need anything just PM or email me or leave a comment on my profile, I'll be happy to help.

Your novel sounds great, I'll review it for you if you'd like.

Have fun reading and writing!
Kaka x

So it's been a whole day since you've joined! How's it going for you? Are you finding everything okay? I see you've already started reviewing, which is absolutely wonderful!
I am its great being here! I cannot wait to start reviewing more!

I have a couple friends who also rode horses. They're really neat, and since my sister just loves horses, I've picked up random facts about them. XD They're really fun to watch though. We even went to a Lipizzaner show once. That was really exciting! You horse riders go through a lot though when it comes to training and competition. Have you done competitions? If so, what are they like?

I have done a few shows They are so much fun!! But I must say this you really have to LOVE your horse to show its a LOT of work, but it is worth it! I stopped recently since my mare is now pregnant and I do not want to stress her out I am training my 3 year old paint filly though and I hope to do dressage with her! And competitive trail!

I remember one of my favorite books at first was about horses. It was amazing! I just can't remember what it was called. xD But it was my first book checked out from the new library when we moved. *checkpoint in life*

lol! Ahh yes my first book that I read was Black Beauty, it made me laugh and it made me cry. Horses are AMAZING! When I am not at the horses I am still surrounded by them, my room is COVERED with them! I have over 100+ Breyers and 80+ Posters! lol!

Your novel sounds very interesting! Fantasy stories like what your novel sounds like interest me a lot. Do you write anything else? Like when you're sick of writing your novel, do you dabble in short stories or poetry?

Um I mainly write novels, I have quite a few started but I am going to finish this one first lol! I have a few poems but I do not like to write them very much, and every time I start to write a short story it turns into a novel idea! lol! Aww thanks! If you would like to read it please email me at kjr5horses@gmail.com I am not quite sure if I will post it here...yet...hmm....

Hello and welcome,
Your novel sounds great. I'll be ready to see it posted if it isn't already. You'll find that most of us are pretty helpful around here with grammar and plot flow or whatever you need really. I'm afraid I'm not sure what to say now. I suppose I can tell you that I am also a christian and love to read and write. Though I have never ridden a horse and am quite frightened by the aspect of sitting on top of one. I have an aunt who has family in Texas...
Okay, well, I hope you have a wonderful YWS experience and that you get some feedback on your novel. If you ever feel that you're lacking in reviews, just tell me, and I'll be happy to read it.
Megsug
Aww...that's to bad! You should try getting around them more and maybe ride a pony? I like my shorter horses lol! In fact I am starting to breed sport ponies I like horses between 13.2-15.3 hands high although I do own a 16.2 hand warmblood he is HUGE!! But he is such a sweet heart! Thanks for the welcome!

Wow! That sounds like a really good story! I'm new hear and I'd love to have a friend on this site. Maybe we could halp each other with our stories and plots, I sure could do with some help! xD
YES! That would be great! I will send you a PM! Can't wait!

Thank you all for welcoming me here and for offering your services for my novel..unfortunately I am still a bit unsure about submitting it..maybe later...hmm...