Gangsta Cat Rap

Young cats rollin' with b-ball bats
and with our backwards gangsta cats
we put dogs down like bathroom mats
we are worse than yo meow mix with trans fats

Homie we don't push drugs, we pull meow mix
Just trying to get-our-fix
We go crazier than that rabbit with Trix
Natural predators, eatin' your baby chicks

lounge all day, sleep all night
Dog, I ain't afraid to get in a fight
We got a paw to your "Humane" system
Shot a mutt, but chose to miss him

We're Gangsta cats
sleighted to be winners
no human pats
now give us our dinner.

Please comment and tell me what you think. I don't intend to make it better, it's just for the fun of it.

Wow. Very funny! I love the meow mix part! The rhymes are very creative and interesting. Not sure if this was intentional or not, but the capitolization at the begining of each line seems a little random. I can't even image what teacher would ask you to make a rap like this. Not that it's bad, but just very different for a school

This is so good! I actually can't find any bits I don't like, although I agree with purplegirl14 about the capitals at the starts of lines. I think that this is really creative, it's so good! I love the bit about putting down dogs like bathroom mats, and although some teachers might be shocked by it, this is a fantastic rap. Keep writing!
~strawberrypop13

This is a great poem! I love it There was nothing really I found that I would troll on except capitilzation and the likes but since you have no intention to edit it, I'll just tell you how much I really like it!

You actually made my day. *like*

Oh wow I love this! This is funny(:

OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS. You can tell I really like it because I just used all caps. It was sooo funny and cute! Great job on this.

i don't know you..but i would call you my best friend.