Savior

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I just learned cinquain poetry from our home room teacher. It is a 5-line non-rhyming diamond shaped poem that uses a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2. Line 1: noun (serves as title). Line 2: two adjectives. Line 3: three gerunds. Line 4: eight syllabic phrase. Line 4: noun (summing up what what the poem's about).

Here is a sample of the cinquain poems I made. I'm not that good yet, sorry.

Savior
Holy, Righteous
Saving, Giving, Loving
Reason why we're here in this world
Jesus
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Very nice, a great example!
"This is our decision,
to live fast and die young...
Yeah it's overwhelming,
but what else can we do?
Get jobs in offices and
wake up for the morning commute?

The models will have children,
we'll get a divorce,
find some more models;
everything must run its course!

Fated to Pretend




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Hey I'm Amie and I'll be reviewing tonight.

Firstly don't sell yourself short, this is great. In factm I don't have any improvements for this, I like it exactly how it is.

GReat work!
-Amie
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Very nice, and so true!
:)
Keep up the good work.
"If you ever have a problem don't say 'Hey God I have a big problem.' Rather 'Hey Problem... I have a big God and it's all going to be okay."




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This was quite great, keep it up!
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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I like it! An interesting style of poetry. :D
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I remember this back in the day. very nice little piece. Simplistic and real keep it up, you manage to capture the style and feel without seeming manipulative.
Well done!




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Really simple, and very beautiful. I like how its short but nice, and just words that all concludes to one thing. Great job!
Trust in God and all else follows.

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It's short and sweet, like all cinquains, but you really touch the heart kinda. At least it touched my heart.
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