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How Not To Make a Human

backgroundbob · 2006-02-27T16:41:25Z

This is what we back on the home forum call a remix: taking someone else's title or inspiration or opening line and turning it into something different. If you want the original, it's here . It's both fairly technical and fairly religious, which I thought would be a fun mix :D hope you like; I'm still figuring out whether I do. HOW NOT TO MAKE A HUMAN [Creator:\program\human\brain] Champagne corks and matinées for children: printing fantasies of executing love - a fragile thing, when errors make it L.U.S.T. Garbage dump: Recycle Bins and rebound fucks, embedded in the code for life. Your Father - Searching: term not found. The manual reads back to front or left to right: a hieroglyphic, Chinese-whisper syntax out of joint, compiling broken hardware in the dark; the overheated warning system, gasping out the crashed, untimely birth. Round glasses on eternal eyes, pushed up to rub the bridges of Your nose; invite each spawned illegal soul to complicate, and love the hacker and the virus both. run/child.[home] /run.

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Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:48 pm

blacktiger3915 says... · Tue Apr 29, 2008 4:48 pm

This was cool. I really liked this! Keep it up!

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Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:15 pm

oneeyedunicornhunter says... · Tue Apr 29, 2008 7:15 pm

very cool poem...it's rare that something like this flows, but it did. very well, i might add.

not quite sure what you were saying with it, though.

as for it being religious...i could say a lot of things, but i won't. this is about your poem.

and it was really good. keep writin', pal.

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