Innocent Words

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Meh, won't let me delete it *pouts* OK, sorry to those people who commented but since I can't delete, I'll just change it, doubt you can delete your comments but if you want to edit them then it's fine by me.

Innocent words, prickling skin.
"That's a nice hat! They don't usually suit people with frizzy hair."
Sweet as honey, stab in the back.
"Wow, I love your new top! I didn't realise they were sold in extra large."
Fluttering eyelashes, fingers crossed.
"Your boyfriend's hot! Shame, you don't make a very good couple."
Pleading eyes, foot to help you fall.
"Have you died your hair? It's a lovely shade, too bad it looks fake, mine's natural."
Linked arms, slap in the face.
"You're going camping? How sweet! I'm going to stay at an all inclusive, five star hotel abroad. It's not fair that your family is so poor."

Burning rage, boiling fury.
"You know what. You're a bitch."

Wow, wonderful emotion. I loved this poem - I think it was really great. Awesome job!!

Keep writing,
Alzora

Innocent words, prickling skin.
"That's a nice hat! They don't usually suit people with frizzy hair."
Sweet as honey, stab in the back.
"Wow, I love your new top! I didn't realise they sold in extra large.I didn't realise they were sold in extra large. This would be more appropriate"
Fluttering eyelashes, fingers crossed.
"Your boyfriends hot! Shame, you don't make a very good couple."
Pleading eyes, foot to help your fall.Couldn't quite it. Was it "foot to help you fall"?
"Have you died your hair? It's a lovely shade, too bad it looks fake, mine's natural."
Linked arms, slap in the face.
"You're going camping? How sweet! I'm going to stay at an all inclusive, five star hotel, abroad. It's not fair that your family is so poor."

Burning rage, boiling fury.
"You know what. You're a bitch."Favorite line. XD

I love it. I think this is the exact thing happening when two girls talk. Why did you make some lines italic? Do you want the readers to emphasize on them?
It was an awesome poem.
Keep up the great work.

Well it seems a little angsty, but the fact that it's based off of something real means a lot. And we are "young writers," I suppose, so why not express angst every now and then? I think you did it in a really expressive and artistic way anyway, so it worked out really well.
Keep writing,
StoryWeaver