Out From The Ashes...

Don't have a clue why I drew this....

I have this really weird style. I always use a black pen and I rarely show my winged people's faces. Mainly because they show up in my dreams and I can't see their faces.

Anyway, please give me feedback! (No comments on the sky portion, though. I know it's smudged. It bothers me too)

GoaGreena,

I think I'm addicted to your art. Seriously. XD

Anyway, this is really beautiful... The wings are gorgeous (I wish I could draw wings that well!) and really simply amazing. I love the way that the fire just transcends the sky... I really have nothing to critique, it's just plain awesome! The only thing that I can see is that - her? - right arm looks as if it connects lower on the body than it does. Maybe it's just my eyes. =]

Keep up the great work!
~ Moonlight

Hello there.

This is really interesting, and I love it. Is it done in paint? I love the wings, they are fascinating, just... wow. I would've like, although, to see a little more of yellow farther down the painting, so it blends a little bit better. And the sky... Well you asked for no comments, so here it is: No comments. The the rest definitely makes up for it, don't worry.
The last thing would be re-size. It's always better when we can see a piece of art all at once, and not in little bits and pieces.

Great job!

-Other One

Wow, this is... inspiring!

First off, don't worry about the sky, it's just fine
I love how you drew from your dreams, but next time I suggest you use a reference for the body proportions, because the back on this person seems a bit lopsided and unfinished. I love how it blends into the painting, though, the colors are truely amazing.
Fantastic job on the wings and fire. Not many people realize just how hard it is to draw those elements until you actually try it! They are magnificent
So, my advice is to work on the human body, because your imagination and colors and elements are all working very well.
Thanks for posting this, it's beautiful
Let me know if you need anything,
~blacksheep

I rarely ever draw people, so I know the body's wrong. I've done maybe two full-bodied drawings of people my whole life. so I know I need to work on that. I've been trying, though.

That fire took forever! I would get it sort of right, then realize the rest was wrong! But I'm pretty happy with it. I did also think it needed more yellow (this was after finished....)

Anyway, thanks for the feedback!

Wow. Just plain wow!
I love your use of colors, and the wings are drawn quite well! (:
As for smudging in the sky; its hardly noticable! Honestly, if you hadn't drawn my eye to it by mentioning it, I wouldnt of noticed!
Inspirational work. (:
-Rayne

This reminds me of the story of the Phoenix. She looks like she has conquered somethig and won. I love the way you made her so dynamic, good job.

Wow, pretty neat. The wings look amazing. so does the hair. Most of the picture is read but you still manage to make everything pop.
1. Stars a bit boring and a little messy. Although I do like how you put white around the moon.
2. The body is obviously out of proportion.
3. Also the wings have been cut of a little on the left hand side.

I hope I helped!

this is very beautiful. yes, ideas are all around us, and it's a nice thing to express things like these even if they're just visions. keep up with your art. i don't have much to say, the others have said enough. stay inspired.

Thanks, everyone! I know the anatomy's wrong. I never draw people, that's why. This was just a rough attempt.
Wings, though? Yeah, I draw 'em all the time.

Again, I stand in awe of your handiwork.