Time

I think back to the days of when I loved you.
Of when it was you who made my dreams come true.
To the times you made me laugh, and the times you made me cry,
and to the times when I was so mad, I almost wanted to die.
Though looking back now, I wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times, when you were almost my everything.
But now there are times when I wonder.
Don’t you miss me at all?
Do you ever long for the times when it was me you would call?
I was always there for you to tell your secrets to.
Time and time again, I was always there for you.
Time and time again you said, “I’m sorry, I love you.”
And time and time again I believed it to be true.
Now there are times when I’m amazed at just how much we have changed.
But looking back now, I still wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times when you were almost my everything.
Even though it’s different, even though it’s sad,
there are times when I looked back on what we had.
Maybe it’s crazy, maybe it’s insane,
but a part of me still misses you, every single day.
I miss the times when you held me, so close, and so tight.
I can’t remember anything else ever feeling so right.
We had our ups, and we had our downs, but I always loved having you around.
They say that time heals all wounds, and who knows?
Maybe that’s true, but for now, I’ll just remember the times, when I loved you.

EXCELLENT!!! wonderful job...im not going to point out any mistakes....since i dont know if there are any....good job..

Great poem! I didnt see any mistakes with this, so yay! :D
It really tells a sort of story, about how fickle young love can be.
You did a really good job!

-Rayne

Thank you both! This was one of the first poems I had ever done. It is my favorite I do believe.

I loved it though I would suggest shortening some lines for a more aesthetically pleasing look otherwise it flows very well and tells a great story.

Awesome poem although I'd change it so the lines are short, by hitting enters on some commas such as this:

I think back to the days of when I loved you.
Of when it was you who made my dreams come true.
To the times you made me laugh,
and the times you made me cry,
and to the times when I was so mad,
I almost wanted to die.
Though looking back now,
I wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times,
when you were almost my everything.
But now there are times when I wonder.
Don’t you miss me at all?
Do you ever long for the times when it was me you would call?
I was always there for you to tell your secrets to.
Time and time again, I was always there for you.
Time and time again you said, “I’m sorry, I love you.”
And time and time again I believed it to be true.
Now there are times when I’m amazed at just how much we have changed.
But looking back now,
I still wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times when you were almost my everything.
Even though it’s different,
even though it’s sad,
there are times when I looked back on what we had.
Maybe it’s crazy, maybe it’s insane,
but a part of me still misses you,
every single day.
I miss the times when you held me,
so close, and so tight.
I can’t remember anything else ever feeling so right.
We had our ups, and we had our downs,
but I always loved having you around.
They say that time heals all wounds,
and who knows?
Maybe that’s true, but for now,
I’ll just remember the times, when I loved you

That makes the lines shorter and hopefully it keeps the flow right. ^^ I say amazing and hope to read more soon lols. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Soulkana<3

I think back to the days of when I loved you.
Of when it was you who made my dreams come true.
To the times you made me laugh, and the times you made me cry,
and to the times when I was so mad, I almost wanted to die.
Though looking back now, I wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times, when you were almost my everything.
But now there are times when I wonder.
Don’t you miss me at all?
Do you ever long for the times when it was me you would call?
I was always there for you to tell your secrets to.
Time and time again, I was always there for you.
Time and time again you said, “I’m sorry, I love you.”
And time and time again I believed it to be true.
Now there are times when I’m amazed at just how much we have changed.
But looking back now, I still wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times when you were almost my everything.
Even though it’s different, even though it’s sad,
there are times when I looked back on what we had.
Maybe it’s crazy, maybe it’s insane,
but a part of me still misses you, every single day.
I miss the times when you held me, so close, and so tight.
I can’t remember anything else ever feeling so right.
We had our ups, and we had our downs, but I always loved having you around.
They say that time heals all wounds, and who knows?
Maybe that’s true, but for now, I’ll just remember the times, when I loved you.

Very nice, and touching. I really enjoyed it. Nice job.

Amberla93 wrote:I think back to the days of when I loved you.
Of when it was you who made my dreams come true.
To the times you made me laugh, and the times you made me cry,
and to the times when I was so mad, I almost wanted to die.
Though looking back now, I wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times, when you were almost my everything.
But now there are times when I wonder.
Don’t you miss me at all?
Do you ever long for the times when it was me you would call?
I was always there for you to tell your secrets to.
Time and time again, I was always there for you.
Time and time again you said, “I’m sorry, I love you.”
And time and time again I believed it to be true.
Now there are times when I’m amazed at just how much we have changed.
But looking back now, I still wouldn’t change a thing.
Because of the times when you were almost my everything.
Even though it’s different, even though it’s sad,
there are times when I looked back on what we had.
Maybe it’s crazy, maybe it’s insane,
but a part of me still misses you, every single day.
I miss the times when you held me, so close, and so tight.
I can’t remember anything else ever feeling so right.
We had our ups, and we had our downs, but I always loved having you around.
They say that time heals all wounds, and who knows?
Maybe that’s true, but for now, I’ll just remember the times, when I loved you.

This was very enjoyable to read. But maybe, some of the times when you used a commma you can put the words after the comma on the next line. But, I loved it just the same.

Hello! I think this poem is great! you have really good rhyming words that don't seem forced at all. Theres a lot of emotion in it too=D I liked the line
Don’t you miss me at all?
Do you ever long for the times when it was me you would call?
I thought it sounded cool =)
I was easy to read and interesting too. I can't say theres anything wrong with it =D