Lost.

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I wish I could find it.
Then maybe I'd be free.

I wish I could find it.
Just one single lead.

I wish I could find it.
What I want to be.

I wish I could find it.
A day filled with peace.

I wish I knew
Instead of felt.

I wish I had any reason to believe in the hand I was dealt.

To walk on bind faith is no easy feat,
And I grow weary even as we speak.

Tomorrow holds no light,

No hope.

Gets me thinking this is all a cruel joke,
A hapless existence,
A masterful lie.

What I want is the truth...
What I want I can't find.
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato




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I adored this. The emotion is conveyed in a concise manner. It's very applicable to people. Everyone has felt "lost" at some point in their life so everyone can relate to a time that this poem would have completely described them. Very well done.
If all the world's a stage...then everything is a lie, an act, a work of tangible genius.




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I really like this, the emotion was easy to read, and I felt despair, as if I were you.
In the end, love always wins.




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Wow. This made me want to reach out to you and help you find what you're looking for. Well done!
I write for the heck of it. what can i say? :)




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Thank you guys! I'm glad you all seem to have got exactly what I was feeling at the time I wrote it, which means I must of got something right ;)
"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato



Some people file their [tax] returns inside of a dead fish.
— John Oliver