This probably took me the least amount of time of any of my drawings, around 40 minutes. I know it's not perfect, but it kind of gives me a warm feeling when I look at it.
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The picture is really good. The colors are amazing! the only critique I have is to take the eyes and move them up some. the set of eyes are to low, giving the perportion of the forehead and nose to extremes.
This a very good picture! I simply adore the coloring. You did a good job. I have two critiques: the head is, like, twice the height it should be, and everything below her chin does not seem proportioned right. Other than that, I love it.
This is lovely! Like others have said the colors are absolutely beautiful and spot on! My critiques would be that she looks sad, maybe if you're going for the shy blushing expression to try and give a corner of her mouth a little upturn? That's just me, when I blush, I also smile a lot Also her eyes seem a little father down her face than they should be but they are perfectly drawn and again the colors are amazing!
Overall a very good piece, kind of reminds me of a Precious Moments doll I had when I was really little! ~day
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I really enjoyed this picture. I loved how almost all the colors were the same, which didn't cause any clashing. And I like manga, so I liked this. Also, I do have some criticism. The chin seemed too large and it looked strange to me, I'm not sure why. But you are indeed a great artist. Keep up the good work!
Tyler.
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You're amazing still this picture made me smile hehe really reminds me of autum ^^ you're drawings give me inspiration to write more than usual haha Good luck and Happy Drawing ^^ Soulkana<3
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This is really good! You're right, it does give me a kind of warm feeling when I look at it. However, I get the impression that the girl's not happy, because she's not smiling. That might be just me, but other than that I really love this!
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Hey, this is a really nice picture, great effort for only 40 minutes work! I'm a little lazy so i will be quick.I agree with you it is the sort of picture an artist can feel really good about.
Plus: The coloring is really amazing, specially with the hair it has a real 3D look very natural. Is seems like you are using a different program or have really just improved with your old one. The eyes a perfect, maybe a little to deep but that's just me, sharper lines might help though, sharper eyelashes and maybe a eye lid would really help bring them out. The face shape is also quite nice and the blush is a great color.
Minus: Neck is short, the whole area looks a little confused and its hard to define what is what. The blush is a little bit to strong and unsymmetrical but that does give the picture character so its not really a minus or a plus.More shading to bring out the contours of the face would be good for next time.
I really love your new work, it's very nice. I love the detail you placed on the hair, it really stands out on your painting. She has some lovely eyebrows and great lighting on her eyes. The only problem I can think of is that she isn't smiling, I love how you made the colors very light in tone but her impression slightly doesn't fit, a small smile would be nice. After all, she's actually blushing. the blush is well painted, and the tone of her skin really makes her look really beautiful.
Overall: Nice work! I hope this does help you on more of your works, I'd love to see more. Take care! <3
You did this in 40 minutes?!?!?!??! I couldn't draw ONE of those eyes in 20! I hope you're cool with my signature top-to-bottom art review!
The hair is very detailed, with all the strands flowing together down the page, and the color is wonderful! A very autumn-y orange, haha. I love the subtle differences in shades of color on the whole hair, and through the whole piece. It makes it look very realistic.
You did a wonderful job on the eyes, as I mentioned before. The shape is perfect, the colors all sit together in harmony, and you can even see the emotion in them as if they're actually there! Love love love it. And of course, the blush which is the center of the whole piece frames the eyes perfectly!
The shape of the head is also very well drawn, and all the colors make it really feel like a tribute to autumn. Great job! Keep on with the good work - SOCKS