L-O-V-E

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I decided to do a crazy funny thing, since I don't have one.
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L- leaving the other one alone. -the base of every relationship
O- over you. - I am so over you! until that party next weekend
V- very crazy. - if you believe love works like it does in the movies, your very crazy.
E- Every little thing.- If your in love, you notice every little thing he/she does annoys you.

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hope you enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD, I had fun writing it, and this was meant to be funny.
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Hello there:3


First the nit-picks

L- leaving the other one alone. -The base of every relationship O- over you. - I am so over you! Until that party next weekendV- very crazy. - If you believe love works like it does in the movies, you're very crazy.E- Every little thing.- When you're in love, you notice every little thing he/she does annoys you.


And some punctuation errors; but anyways.

I thought it was very amusing to read and the idea is quite original.

Good Job!
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Heya,
This brought me a chuckle, which is always fun. The nit-picks have already been taken care of, so I won't bother saying them again. ^^
Nice, little work, with a good idea.
A short review for a short text, seems fair enough. :P
But yeah, I liked it. Keep writing! :)

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Haha this is a fun peice. The mistakes were pointed out already. This made me giggle. I would love to show this to the couple's in my school.
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glad you guys enjoyed it XD
hush, my sweet
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It was Amazing I really liked it.
! Time to Write !



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