Divine Eternity

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Agathocacological;
I am augury.
That who is ideological,
A crown of methylmercury.
The pantomancer
Of the macrocosm.
The fate of the theomancer
Lies in the pantacosm.
The death of the microlipet,
The life of the misomath,
The trust of the hypocrit,
All profit the telepath.
Why bear deisidaimonia,
When you can be the Daedalian?
I mock gerasophobia,
It is I who deserves your paean.
Are you the victor of gigantomachy?
He who is xyresic,
My lackie,
Obsolescent.
#TNT

WRFF




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This seems like a broken poem, which fuels its meaning. I like it. I understood it.
-Dante93




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I agree with what Dante said :) This poem is very fractured, in a way, and that's what gives it beauty.

Also, incredibly big words. Not sure what some of them meant, but it really adds to the poem's style

Keep up the good work :)
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I feel like such a loser but I like the broken pattern of it. An ode to big words. And you used words that aren't even in my dictionary, so I didn't understand most of what you wrote. Though I did understand the first three lines.
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