Im sorry to rain on the sunshine, but this is rather horrible. I got a minute in, and I had to just start typing this, because I couldn't stand that in one sitting.
First off, the lip synching isnt even...well... synched? It is far from close too. Please put more work into it next time.
Im sorry if I sound rude, but, well, this is not good. At all.
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