Alice in Wonderland--uncoloured illustration

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Hi all,

So, I drew this for my art class. On one side is the Alice in Wonderland and the other is a sort-of example of my my "quick" drawings..a joke. I didn't feel like cropping it out because I had another use for this scan. And I'm useless at resizing. I apologise.

1. Should I colour this?
2. Other things you may find? Just review. Please.

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*squints at drawing*

I really like it! It's very Alice-ish. What I'd like to see is some pattern, maybe in the background? It seems quite plain at the moment, and not because of the lack of colour.

Certainly you should colour it! This is great and it will be even better with the colour, but remember to keep it simple.

I really like her expression but I feel her legs are too short and skinny for the rest of her body. Resizing it would be awesome too :D

Sorry for the lamely short review.
Keep drawing!

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It is a good sketch....
Good work on the expressions and the way she looks.... Nice work with the eyes too...
Good shading but its a bit too light....
Try using darker sketches for some particular areas like hair and the grass below....
Overall a good sketch...
Keep up the good work...
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ALICE! :o Haha, I think you should definitely colour, or at least make it a tad bit darker, it'll bring out the shapes :)

I shall review.. the best I can, because it's a bit small for my eyes.
-I like the dress, very Alice-y like :)
-I can't see very well but are her arms...disappearing?
- Also, the background, it seems a bit pale. I'm not sure if those lines are supposed to be mountains, or just erased lines?
-Last and not the least, like Durrie said, her expression is great!

Keep on drawing! Hope this helped!

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Hello :)

Definitely color it! I can't see much, because it's so pale, but once it's colored... It's going to be great!

The second part, however... I can't see much. I can make out a cat? I love it, because it's cartoon like, and well, it looks so cute and cuddly. ;)

The other drawings, I can't make out. So definitely re-size it. I know it's complicated... but there's a rubric on how to do it via paint, which is much easier then photobucket (since it doesn't always work :)) I think it's Abdigail who wrote it? And if you go in Art and Photography, it should be there. Good luck! :)

I can't say much anyone didn't already mentioned. So this is going to be a short review, sorry. :(

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