Night walker mortal stalker blood drinker quick thinker hungry killer mind willer wood hater no data life stealer blood dealer fast mover never the loser
"The rabbit always squeals in the jaws of the fox, but when has another rabbit ever rushed up to save it?" Damon Salvatore ;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3 Need a review? Just ask Just keep writing, just keep writing, do-do-do-do-do
Neat poem. Fun to read, the pace is fast enough that a person don't stop to think about what he or she's reading, just get flashes of whatever cool image comes to mind. The 'mind willer' line threw me off a bit, however. I'm not sure 'willer' is a word, and it just sounds a tad too silly. Dunno what you could change it to... 'thriller,' maybe?
Fun read, keep writing!
Formerly 'ilyaeelz.' Others experiment with drugs. I experiment with punctuation and grammar.
"Research your own experiences for the truth, absorb what is useful, reject what is useless, add what is specifically your own." - Bruce Lee
Really good piece... Short, neat and everything is in a perfect flow... Its a good thing that everything sticks with the heading and nothing is off the track...
Keep up the good work... PM me for anything...
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