Well.... Okay, let's see here. I must say that this poem is... well, it's a mouthful.
Poetically, I'll admit, it's pretty good. It shows good writing skills and a bit of personality. That's always good to include in any sort of writing, formal, personal, or informal.
As far as the content goes, that's questionable. You're treading in shark filled waters wearing a suit made out of seal meat. Or holding a lit match in a room full of dynamite. Now, that's not always a bad thing, right? Sometimes people really like it when you go on the dangerous side of things, right? I mean, if you've ever read some of the things by George Orwell, they always seem to be attacking different things in politics or in government or things of that nature, but in a satirical way. So people can take it for what they think it's worth, whether it be an odd story about animals on a farm or a comparison story for socialist Russia and Stalin.
I do agree with many of the things that some of the other reviewers have already commented on. This poem seems vastly generalized and narrow-minded, but like I've said before, that's not always a bad thing. It all depends on your presentation. And, to be honest, the presentation on this was rather... blunt. Forced. Uncreative. It reminds me of propaganda as well, honestly.
A suggestion I do have, if you really want lots of people to read this, turn it into a satire. Satires are good for everybody, because thee will be the people that just want to enjoy it as a good story/poem, then there will be the others who actually want to find the meaning behind everything and figure out what exactly it is that you are going after. This would 1) give people who don't share the same views as you more of an example of why they should think the way you think and 2) give those that do share the same ideas as you do more reason to think that way.
I'm not suggesting sugar-coating it, either. Some things, sure, are best told flat-out and straight to your face without any sort of safety net or protection from getting one's feelings hurt. But still, this is a poem written by a writer. A writer's whole purpose in life is to write their ideas in a way that people who like those ideas want to read it and those that don't like those ideas will at least gain some interest through the writing.
Now, don't go after me saying that although I'm entitled to have my own opinion, I'm just blind to the problems of the world that America causes or anything like that. I'm an Oklahoman, and yes, Okies do tend to have a bit of a love for their country, mostly because we do have a better outlook on life in general, or at least when compared to states that are in climates unlike Oklahoma's, but I do still have an idea about how much our government is flawed. But name me a government that isn't flawed? Name me a government that hasn't made choices that the general public didn't like? Obama is still trying to get universal health care, yet I know that not too many people like that. I also know that the main reason he did get voted in was because everyone thought "Oh, boy! A black president! He should do great!" when in truth his ideas weren't very good to begin with. I'm not attacking Obama, I'm just saying I'm aware of things that go on.
Again, I'm not saying that a lot of what you're saying in your poem isn't exactly just or deserved, but you're still attacking things harshly and trying to make it seem artistic when it's not. Heck, even screamo singers who sing about death and hate and things that are wrong with the world still have to add some artistic touches here and there so then people aren't immediately turned off from their song.
