Okay I wrote this whole thing out and then it got deleted so this is from memory so it may not be as good.
(By the way this is not influenced by Twilight so don't say I have flaws in my vampire characters because they don't have the attributes that Twilight vampires do. Also it is very short I know.)
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Dominic's eyes were crisp and black.They had a sinister glint in them, only focused on the task at hand. His hair was jet black and unruly, falling into his face as he ran through the dark forest. He followed his instincts, ducking below overhanging branches that were like barricades stopping him from getting to where he wanted to go. He sniffed the air and the unmistakable smell of perfume reached his nose. He chased after the smell, knowing that this person would quench the thirst that burned his throat like fire.
Dominic launched himself onto the figure, taking pleasure in her screams of pain as his razor sharp fangs pierced her skin like needles.
A scarlet blood covered the front of his shirt, staining the material. He watched as her skin lost its colour and her eyes turned blank and staring. He knew then that he had drained all the life out of her.
He stood up and wiped his mouth, he searched the area for sounds of movement. None. They must still be oblivious to her departure from the group.
The pile of dirt grew higher as he dug the grave. He covered her body carefully they must not find out about his midnight snack.
His face was flushed with the warmth of the blood that now pulsed through his veins with every beat of his heart. He took one last fleeting glance at the body of the girl and without a hint of remorse he muttered "Dominic, you have really out done yourself" He said to himself.
Dominic turned away from his victim, speeding into a run.
The spidery branches scratched his face and arms, as he reached the clearing he saw the dark shadows of vampires.
"SHOW YOURSELVES!" he yelled, creating a loud echo throughout the forest, the blood making him feel powerful.He smiled grimly as several glowing eyes turned their attention on him."Show your findings" he said in a calm and stern voice as the vampires dropped their possessions at his feet. He snarled as looked through them."THATS NOT GOOD ENOUGH!" The vampires winced "Now I don't know much about her; except that we have to find her I don't care how but it has to be soon. Torture information out of them if you must. Our snacks are now more valuable than ever if you want to find Abigail."
Dominic roared at them as they scattered into the bushes, their muscles burning with the strain of the search. Silently fuming with rage he watched their careless movements through the bush. He wouldn't be surprised if they were hunted down by other beasts within minutes.
Dominic paced back and forth, the mossy undergrowth of the forest cushioning his raw feet, a flame of white pain moved down his back as he fell to the ground his head pounding as the images started, revisiting his history.
"Abigail" he whispered as he saw her dark shape coming towards him. "I have so much to tell you..." his sentence trailed off as Abigail tore into his skin stopping herself just in time to let Dominic feel the pain that pulsed his veins as the vampire venom took hold. The last thing he noticed was her dark black hair swishing as she walked away, ear drum crushing screams following little did he know that it was him speaking the pain that she had took upon him.
As he woke from his trance a pale light had started to slip between the trees. Dawn. Abigail must be searching my mind He thought, as only Abigail could conduct such painful memories to reveal themselves. Quickly he found some shelter under a log and sat thinking over attack plans that could work to get the information he needed to find, what he had been searching for all these years, the one who had inflicted this ongoing nightmare upon them.
Abigail.
But it's too late for that now. I LOVE the title, it's really grabbing and cool!