Christmas

Christmas Is here,
All the lights, all the bells.
Sales in shops,
and toys all around.

Gifts under the tree,
The angel ontop.
Nativity scenes,
And the bonbons go pop. Cool stanza

Such a wonderful time,
and a busy one too. You haven't capitilized this letter although you don't have to you have with the others
With cards in my hand,
Merry christmas to you!

cupcake wrote:Christmas Is here,
All the lights, all the bells.
Sales in shops,
and toys all around.

Gifts under the tree,
The angel ontop.
Nativity scenes,
And the bonbons go pop.

Such a wonderful time,
and a busy one too.
With cards in my hand,
Merry christmas to you!

I love the beat to this poem and it's good to get in the christmas spirit, i can't find any spelling mistakes so thats good and i like the grammer 'comma, full stop' it gives it that beat just to make it a bit longer and a bit more feastive maybe you could add in the carols singing or the fake santa on a sligh (can't spell the word) and i think it would pick it up more!