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Just a Dream.

telle_04 · 2010-12-09T09:45:50Z

*because i really miss him..and i'm playing with rhyme.* I. You hummed out a sweet, sad note Then took out a pen and wrote and old familiar quote There was no sound, you looked around and now you have found That you're all alone, you're far away from home Silently you drift to me but it's just a dream I wish you were here, so come back to me dear [chorus] I'll whisper your name As I lay down tonight beneath the pale moonlight You came to me in reverie, but it felt so real When you held me tight against the cold last night And when you stood to turn out the light You kissed me goodnight II. You walked on the sandy shore The morning was fine with you, but I know you miss me too And though you're gone, you cannot run from what you have done I'll be wearing blue, still I'll wait for you Silently you drift to me but it's just a dream I wish you were here, so come back to me dear [chorus] I'll whisper your name As I lay down tonight beneath the pale moonlight You came to me in reverie, but it felt so real When you held me tight against the cold last night And when you stood to turn out the light I saw the stars losing their flight But you told me that we'd both be alright And you kissed me goodnight

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:56 pm

pterascreams says... · Mon Feb 28, 2011 4:56 pm

I'm normally not much for love songs, but I really like it. It has a great flow to it. I definitely would love to hear the music you put to it(if you decide on some). I think it would sound beautiful. Great job!

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Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:36 pm

Abi says... · Tue Mar 01, 2011 1:36 pm

this song shows real feeling like taylor swift does with her songs and the jonas brothers. i think that this song could do great in the charts. this is an amazing way of writing to show people what your feeling and show them through lyrics and stuff.

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Just a Dream.

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