i cry hard

Angelheart wrote:I cry I cry hard
But I don’t when I have my mamma It's spelled momma
She holds me tight and cares for me everyday
I love her more than life
It is now my reason for being here

The pain is so hard I cant believe Maybe you could have said, "the pain is so hard tro bare I can barely believe it.
How much I want to go home
To my my home town but now im trying to fit in
Its so hard he pulls me down lying to me

Terror fills my eyes and I cry ,I cry hard
He's my love and I hate that he did this to me
I gave away most of who I truly am
To fit into his mold of a perfect girlfriend

My friends try to warn me to leave
But I never had the strength I
Died the first time u kissed me Love this line
I lost my most important battle
I went under and I didn’t resurface
I stayed in ur arms where I was safe
And I felt protected ur were my hero you were
And that was sad for my fear of u what?

Now here I am standing on my own and here with out u
Im better , I still love you
With all my heart and I always have
But now james has stolen my heart

Ill be gone soon my old flame
New zeland will be my new home
A boy with red hair is in my future
And so are his inborn children this line is awkward

My heart no longer skips a beat
When I see ur face now its just an old fire
Burning deep and slow
But no longer a hot passion
I did like the idea of this poem, but you havent really gone in detail about what happened. What happened? Why did ya'll break up. You have some grammar and sentence structure issues but anyways I liked it just put some more effort into it.
So heres my final goodbye
To a boy with nothing to lose or gain
I wanted but now I wish to get rid of
My heart, my mind, and my sould has had enough

So to my sweet boy I say
I will love you forever but now
Im will leave and never come back
Love always ur angel