pointe2drama wrote:“You know that kid in our third grade class, Patryk Andrews?” Mandy asked Georgia, leaning in close.
nice nameare these real names or did u edit or make them up?
“ Yeah?” Georgia replied.
Teardrop wrote:Spoiler
Okay, I wrote this for my friend and her little sister, her little sister she's little and she has cancer, and it's not going good at all. I had inspiration to write this from them. I know it lacks detail, but I'm not sure if it's really for reviews. : ) It's short, but It'll do ; )
The two girls sat in the back seat of the little blue car. They were sisters, one lucky, and one with not so much luck.
Georgia looked at her sister, who was staring, bored, at the frosted window. She watched the hills roll past her.
“ Hey, Mandy, wanna play a game of truth or dare?” Georgia asked her older sistercomma and hopeful hopefully, her brown eyes shining.
Mandy swiveled her head around. Although she was bored, she said yes, since she might not get another chance to play with her sister before her sister's ten days were up.
“Kay, Mandy Truth or Dare?” Georgia questioned.
“ Truth.”
“Hmm...” Georgia pondered, and then she rested hercomma recently shaved commahead on her fist nonchalantly.
“ Who do you like in school?” Georgia asked commain a hushed tone so her father wouldn't hear her in the front seat.
“You know that kid in our third grade class, Patryk Andrews?” Mandy asked Georgia, leaning in close.
“ Yeah?” Georgia replied.
“I like him,” Mandy said in a soft tone, her sister reacted excitedly and curiously, wanting more secrets.
“Love?” she pressed.
Mandy nodded and spelled “LOVE” out on frosted window. Georgia giggled softly, and they continued their game on the way to the hospital.
Those ten days went by too fast.
Seven Years Later...
Seventeen year old Mandy sat in the same backseat of the little blue car given to her by her father when she turned sixteen.
Tonight, Mandy's friend Kelly was driving. She sat in the driver's seat, and in the passenger seat was her boyfriend David.
Mandy turned towards Patryk who was in the seat next to her. He laced his slender, bony fingers threw hers happily.
“ Did you like the movie?” he asked hercxomma softly.
“ Yes,” Mandy replied softly.
Kelly pulled up to Patryk's house. Before opening the door to get out, Patryk leaned over and pecked Mandy on the cheek. A kiss so soft, but just enough to make Mandy blush.
He waved, but before Mandy could wave back he left and disappeared into his house.
Mandy smiled a huge smile as she stared at the frosted window and Mandy spelled out one commasingle word in the frost.
“LOVE”