My first drawing on here; and I'll be the first to say it's not great. But at least my computer is finally letting me upload my art!
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Yes, it's a guy. All the guys I draw look slightly effeminate....
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You must be swift as the coursing river, With all the force of a great typhoon, With all the strength of a raging fire, Mysterious as the dark side of the moon.
I like the way this was drawn. I like the fact that you remembered to draw the shadows of his hair and clothes. It looks kind of like you drew it in the manga style. I like the way you used the strokes to represent the folds of the fabric. I think that if you want to make him seem more masculine, that you should draw the hint of or actual muscles on the part of his arm that we can see. Also your fabric is loose, which makes him look even more feminine. I think if you made it a bit tighter it would make him look more masculine. Altogether this was really good. It looks a little messy when you see it shrunken down. Did you consider uploading it to Tiny Pic? It'll let you post the image right in the post itself.
Very nice lines and shading; I would consider differentiating between some lines though. You drew pretty lightly in some places, and so it all kind of blends together and becomes a big area of gray pencil marks. Try making some of the lines cleaner- I tend to do a messy kind of drawing, but usually it's good to try to clean some of it up though.
Altogether, really nice job. I love how his foot peeks out at the bottom.
What are you? Some kind of drawing master peice person? Why, I can't even draw a straight line without screwing it up (even when using a ruler). My God, I never thought you as a drawer. Well, well: a great writer and now an artist! What aren't you, Prin?
One thing I will say is the shading around the skirt of kimono is rather messy, but hey, I can't draw for the life of me let alone shade so I really cannot talk. Though I do have to say one more thing before I begin praising it again, it looks like he is kind of wearing pants and then his legs dissapear. I suggest get rid of the crease line out lining his leg, better yet, dull it down. Trust me, it will really make this picture shine.
Now back to praising, OMG I love this. The upper body and face are like the bomb! I cannot believe it, keep drawing honetsly. I love this so much, you've got talent, Prin. I want to see more, MORE!!!
Hy. Being a sketch and all, I can't really say much about it. I like the idea , and the expression on his face. You could work a little more on proportions, but that is work in progress. You'll get to that too , you got talent. Good job.
- Rob.
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I really do love this and I find the detail on it fantastic. His face is so realistic, it jumps out at me and I feel like he's watching me with those dark eyes. The shading on it is messy but it works with the picture, gives it a more edgy feel. I feel like doing a little art now! haha Really wonderful piece
I am more of a photography expert than I am a drawing one, but I do believe my justice can reign around the land and bring joy to artists. Now where was I?
Lets see,
Hair: The hair is a little to long, and is shaded the same way the shoulder is. It litterally looks like his hair is morphing into his left shoulder (right when veiwing).
Robesish thing: The shading is a little weird at the bottom. It is hard to distinguish wat are folds and what are just rouge lines.
