Fatal love

I loved the fatal attraction part at the end(:. I thought this story was put togetrher in a hurry and should be in more detailed and more lengthy. I love how you make your points but I think you could add more to it, and it could be alot better. I loved how you wrote it. Good job.

This little piece is really good. I don't see anything wrong with it. x)

I love how it's written in "poem form". It's very interesting and it explains a lot. I didn't find any mistakes but overall I thought it was really good. :3

I really like this, and it's so true. Even though I have never been in a realatioship I felt the pain and the hardness of being dumped.