Greatest Haiku Ever

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My friend and I wrote this haiku in physics today when we probably should have been paying attention. It's dumb, I quite enjoy it! :wink:

Numberless minutes
The hoola-hoop of life turns
Slowly, like a fox.

Haha.
words, language - what wonderous
creatures these beings are,
what joyous routes of sorrow and
longing they pave.




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like a fox?
i don't get it.
Carpe Diem.




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Neither do I. Maybe it's a Canadian thing...? lol
No seriously, I like this. It's funny.
My only complaint is, don't you have to make a hoola hoop go really fast to keep it spinning? Or it will fall down your body and die? Eh, or I could be completely wrong. I haven't used one of those things in ages!
i thought you were shallow, but then i fell in deep.




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Yeah, that's the stupidity of it. Foxes are fast, meaning that life is fast, although, when you think about it, what is longer than life? Get it? Slowly, like a fox, which is fast . . . lol. It's not really supposed to make sense!
words, language - what wonderous
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what joyous routes of sorrow and
longing they pave.




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Oh, haah. Whoops.
I fail when it comes to interpretation--sorry!


Nice work!
i thought you were shallow, but then i fell in deep.



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