Luna

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“Luna”

Moon-painted water –
A million tides of black evening silk
Speckled with salty white and moaning with
The deepest of blues

I am upon the edge, or rather I am the brink
The hair’s breadth, the heart’s beat
My voice, thought, dream awakens the seas
And yet water is heartless, soulless…cold.

If only I could in this way recall a lover
Or milk-glass Sunday afternoons
(Seen through a haze of grey clouds like lost feathers)
The white light of the morning after

Oh, sweet adoring arms encompassing
My world where even night is filled
With bright starry fire:
Will you not come away awhile?

Be beckoned from my memory
Return to me, return to me
I ever loved a shadow-man and yet
One can’t hold a shadow’s hand.

Sighing selahs, a peaceful gnawing
Of deep-sea teeth and moonbeams –
Like oil in water, flecks of light
Return with every evening’s tide, and cannot fade.
"Hand in hand, the letters cross the room, whirl around the bed, sweep past the window, wriggle across the wall, swoop to the door, and return to begin again."

~Jean-Dominique Bauby




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This is beautiful <3
It's hard to find poetry like this on y.w.s.
Please keep writing!
"I never said I'd lie and wait forever.
If I died we'd be together.
I cant always just forget her.
But she could try."
The ghost of you- MCR <3




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Hi!
I'm speechless. This is absolutely amazing; beautiful. You got my breath catching in my throat. I want so much to say how much I love this poem - but I can't find the words. I was immediately drawn in by the title - 'luna', moon, is somehow a very beautiful word. I really don't know - you've caught me out. I have nothing to say.
It was absolutely amazing. I don't think I've read a better poem on YWS yet.
God bless you,
Ignis
The POTATO of DOOM

A thousand times it calls your name
A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.


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