Hi, How You Doing?

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I know "How you doing" is grammatically incorrect but I feel like that's just how I have to say it. :)

Hi how you doing?
It’s been a while since we talked
but I wanna let you know that I’m ok
Oh me? I’m just getting by, day to day
Is that your new boyfriend?
Hey well you know, love happens
Heh, well I’m riding solo
There’s a couple of girls but they’re so-so
I don’t mind being single it’s really fun
Just going out there, obligated to no one
Yeah I’m doing great
Actually I lied, I’ve been kinda lonely of late
You see, when it was you and me
We were flowers and bees
We go to together
It’d be inevitable that we’d be connected forever
No it’s not that I’m still in love with you
I’m still in love with the idea of you
I’m in love with being able to expose myself
And at the same time you’d pour yourself
On me like water on soil
And from it blossoms the tree
Of wisdom that makes me, me.
But when you left, I feel like I haven’t grown since
No not literally but in the philosophical sense
Throughout the seasons I remained the same
Other girls didn’t have the rain
To nurture me and to help me grow
Now I know you’re lying when you say you have to go
I’m just making you feel awkward and you don’t wanna stay
But I need your help and let me just say
What I need to
The one person I’ve always shied away from for help since we were through
Is the one person I need the most, that’s right, you.
To be honest I don’t know how you can help me or what you need to do
All I know is, I need love too.
Any man can handle adversity, to test a man's character give him power - Abraham Lincoln

To be the greatest is when everything before you is obsolete, and everything after you bears your mark. - ?




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You rarely ever see a guy's point of view in this situation, especially in poetry. So it really made me think about what guys think after a break up (or something like that).

Also, how you doing is also an age-old pick up line which made me lawl.
"In YOUR Indo"




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This is AMAZING! it actually made me feel really bad, like I could actually feel the emotions you portrayed. I love it, really.
I like Rainbows. ;)




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