This is a freewrite I did a few weeks ago. I know it's not that great but I'd like some feedback on what works and what doesn't. Thanks in advance!
I promised myself
I'd write some more
Beautiful nonsense.
Maybe this year,
Someone will actually
Hear it.
I also thought
I'd start to make sense,
But that hasn't really
Worked out.
What is this exactly?
I just don't know.
I spill out my soul
Through a pen from
some funeral home.
I wonder how it got here...
Well anyway,
I guess I should apologize
And thank you for reading
This far.
That's my problem.
I say sorry way too much
Even when you're the one
Who knocked me down.
I need some sort of wake-up call,
'Cause it's time to live.
But I'm too lazy to get our of bed
And hit the floor.
Maybe you could shake me awake,
Or splash some cold water in my face,
I should thank you for that,
But I won't.
