P.S the name sucks in my opinion and I would like you to think of a fitting name, thank you ^ ^
‘‘You think you’re so-oh cunning
But you don’t know what is coming
You want to make a stand
But you don’t even have a plan’’
yet that doesn’t even matter
Put it in the latter, climbing this ladder
To my own little heaven
[instrumental crash then pause]
Wait no, I gotta stay here
[starts up again, all instruments build up for chorus]
Chorus
Cause the fight is for something grand
Why does love need to be planned
Sometimes it needs to be sudden
Especially when the heart is sunken
I’m not gonna stay broken
Never take the painful token
[chorus’s tune but less extrovert, more ambient with guitar riffs]
These people wrecked my life
But I’m still standing right here
They’ve taken my love. My dear
But I got to be sincere
I won’t ever give up
don’t have the liberty
When my friends need me
When I see that girl, with my enemy
It cuts so deep, why did she hurt me
I thought I did everything
I stood by her, when they went and hurt her
But now she’s with them
The ones lied about me, the ones that left mollie
Mollie loves them, now~
[guitar whines then everything builds up again]
Chorus
[militant drumming with a riff and bass line to suit the theme. Bass drum is slammed after the end of each sentence]
Some days I feel like a soldier
Cause my friends get shot down, or stake me in the back
I keep on fighting, to stay alive
Pushing these bullets out, from my torn up heart
But I still got my closest friends
And we will tear them apart
[the drumming builds up, like a heart beat then opens into the chorus]
Chorus
[quieter, the closure to instrumental bars i.e. summing up verse followed by then end chorus which should be more of a reverb or delay effect to it]
Now what am I saying, right~ now
Well it’s that I will stand for my friends
I love them more than myself
Stick for till bitter end
don’t care what happens to me now-
Chorus [closing]
But you don’t know what is coming
You want to make a stand
But you don’t even have a plan’’
yet that doesn’t even matter
Put it in the latter, climbing this ladder
To my own little heaven
[instrumental crash then pause]
Wait no, I gotta stay here
[starts up again, all instruments build up for chorus]
Chorus
Cause the fight is for something grand
Why does love need to be planned
Sometimes it needs to be sudden
Especially when the heart is sunken
I’m not gonna stay broken
Never take the painful token
[chorus’s tune but less extrovert, more ambient with guitar riffs]
These people wrecked my life
But I’m still standing right here
They’ve taken my love. My dear
But I got to be sincere
I won’t ever give up
don’t have the liberty
When my friends need me
When I see that girl, with my enemy
It cuts so deep, why did she hurt me
I thought I did everything
I stood by her, when they went and hurt her
But now she’s with them
The ones lied about me, the ones that left mollie
Mollie loves them, now~
[guitar whines then everything builds up again]
Chorus
[militant drumming with a riff and bass line to suit the theme. Bass drum is slammed after the end of each sentence]
Some days I feel like a soldier
Cause my friends get shot down, or stake me in the back
I keep on fighting, to stay alive
Pushing these bullets out, from my torn up heart
But I still got my closest friends
And we will tear them apart
[the drumming builds up, like a heart beat then opens into the chorus]
Chorus
[quieter, the closure to instrumental bars i.e. summing up verse followed by then end chorus which should be more of a reverb or delay effect to it]
Now what am I saying, right~ now
Well it’s that I will stand for my friends
I love them more than myself
Stick for till bitter end
don’t care what happens to me now-
Chorus [closing]
