The Stars Are Always There Prolouge

pshhxhoney wrote:“Okay.” I finally answered, hoping that I picked the right choice. I didn’t bother looking at him, I was afraid of his reaction. He jumped off the branch and landed perfectly on his feet onto the ground. <-- Change this to either: and landed perfectly on his feet or and landed perfectly onto the ground. It doesn't really sound right with both. I silently climbed down the tree and met him. <-- This sentence sounds a little odd. Change the wording just a tad. He didn’t grab my hand this time; he grabbed my wrist and led me through the dark. I wasn’t sure what to expect next, nor did I care. I just enjoyed what I had right now. It didn’t matter that he wasn’t holding add "on" maybe? I'm not absolutely sure. to my hand this time, but I did care that I was with him. I only cared about here; now.