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kikialicia31
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:09 am
kikialicia31 says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 3:09 am
Wow! First of all, I don't even know what to say about it. It's cool and creepy. I write some poem and I only post when I feel like I want someone to read it. I think it's great. There's some error but it's been fixed already. Keep on writing!

Good luck,
Kiki.
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DaSpetsnaz
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:02 pm
DaSpetsnaz says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:02 pm
Um, I don't know what to say. That was an outgoing poem, but it kind of scared me a little. You did everything that a poet should, and more.
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Emmzziee
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Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:08 pm
Emmzziee says... · Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:08 pm
This is chilling :D
I just love it... It paints a picture, and still leaves so MUCH to the imagination because you don't give anything away.
I love the way you've written this, too. Yay :) Xxxx
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