perfectly imperfect

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There are a lot of things I wanna say to him
But I am too afraid he'll never listen.
'Cause after all he was never a friend of mine.
No one loves him,
No one cares for him.

He lives alone in his big and empty world
Forever lonely, deep in misery.
'Cause after all, he has a bittersweet life--
Always full of fake smiles
And sugar-coated lies.

[chorus]
His smile's the best frown in the world,
His laugh's the saddest song that I've ever heard.
Indifferent and dying
He can't go on pretending
That sadness is a friend and happiness kills
One day he would stop crying
To let go of things he's hiding,
There is no way I can deny to myself

I know there's something missing from his broken life
Someone special who was taken away.
'Cause after all she was the best he'd ever had,
There was simply no one else
Now there was no one else to stay.

{chorus 2x]

But I know I can't change
The way he feels about himself
Give him up, he'll be fine
I'll just adore him from afar
I'll just adore him from afar.

[chorus]

There are a lot of things I wanna say to him
But I am too afraid, I'm simply too afraid..

*i can't sleep last night and i was up until two in the morning, thinking about someone. then i made a song about him.
Last edited by telle_04 on Thu Sep 30, 2010 10:11 am, edited 4 times in total.
You've got the key to my heart..but have you forgotten about a duplicate?
Sorry. I've already given it to someone else.




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No you don't, it's amazing. Every other thought roaming in your mind is another page of agony to someone. Never stop writing, and once you have the words rush to your paper. I really liked it, though I would really advise you to use stronger vocabulary, because it gives such deep and strong anger and grief to such a topic. However, it's only my opinion, only you know what suits your work best darling.
Write on, it's your thing.




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ambrosiaa wrote:No you don't, it's amazing. Every other thought roaming in your mind is another page of agony to someone. Never stop writing, and once you have the words rush to your paper. I really liked it, though I would really advise you to use stronger vocabulary, because it gives such deep and strong anger and grief to such a topic. However, it's only my opinion, only you know what suits your work best darling.
Write on, it's your thing.


thank you for these words, dear.
actually, i am PLANNING to tell him how i really feel. *sighs* and yet, i am too afraid.
thanks for droppin' by. :)
You've got the key to my heart..but have you forgotten about a duplicate?
Sorry. I've already given it to someone else.



Not all treasure is silver and gold, mate.
— Captain Jack Sparrow