[September Contest]- Averse to Space

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Hey ryan!

First of all, thank you for rhyming. There are not enough poems on YWS that rhyme. (in my opinion) The flow was nice, but I don't like that you broke you rhyming pattern at the end. This is my own weird poetry quirk: I don't care if you break the rhyming pattern as long as it isn't in the last stanza. It's weird, I know. The last line is great, but it would be made stronger if it followed your preset pattern.

Overall, clear theme and great rhyming pattern (with the exception of the end)

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