love, friendship, family

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Simple Advices


When you don’t know where to look
Just close your eyes,
When you don’t know whom to trust
Look at your reflection with a dazzling smile.
And when the lights go out,
Leaving you in the dark
Don’t reach for a candle,
Just search for the light.

When danger creeps closer blocking all escapes
Leaving you with no choice but to hide,
Face your greatest fear
And you’ll know if there is really anything to fight.

When one single path ends in a million directions
And you don’t know which one to choose
Just follow your heart ‘cause if you are true
At the end of every wrong turns
There’s a blessing waiting for you.

Finally when there is no more worry
And you have nothing to do
Sit down and think of me,
For I’ll always be thinking of you.




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i wrote this almost a year ago for my little sister Titly.....and I know whoever is reading this can dedicate it to some one they love too




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I love the message to this. It is really beautiful!

My own problem is with the first stanza. It doesn't flow very well. Maybe rework words? I'm not sure. I'm sorry. But I just know it doesn't flow well.

Keep up the good work!

Jamie
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain



You cannot have an opponent if you keep saying yes.
— Richard Siken