This is something that i wrote on an impulse, so i just wanted to know if its any good and if i have any talent as a writer.
When the mind tries to get inside another it can become very complicated, you are trying to think for yourself but at the same time you are also trying to think as the next person, to figure out what is happening inside their mind. Sometimes you win, sometimes you lose. But one can only win if the opposing side is willing to play. Without two players you will stay inside your own dark mind and continue to wonder until your foe decides to fight back. When that time finally comes you must be ready, for if you are not, your own mind will be read and figured out and you will lose. One’s mind is complex, and for every mind you can read, the more powerful you become. One after another you become stronger and stronger. But by the time that your foe arrives you start to forget how you used to think, why you were trying to get into this one persons mind in the first place. Your mind cluttered with the thoughts of a thousand others, your foe stands straight in front of you not willing to back down. And with one finally blow your foe falls.
You reign victorious, but when you look around, there is no one. You have stolen the minds of all of your loved ones leaving you in a dark nowhere and by the time you realize this, it is too late. You crouch down and hold onto your legs as tightly as you can trying to find some comfort but none comes. You listen in on the sounds of a thousand and one minds all together unable to control it. You grasp your head trying to clear your mind but you cannot. Then one tiny thought slides into view. If I no longer live then I can no longer think, no longer hear the voices. Silence. That what I had to do, it’s the only way.
But as I was ready to end it all, a figure came into view. The person was almost completely covered by a radiating light leaving only a silhouette. The person extended one arm out offering me a way to get out. Freedom from everything else, another chance. This was a big decision. My whole life I had nothing, no one that would stand by my side, can I trust this person? Then something happened inside of me, a small light ticked on telling me to take this persons hand. I slowly reached out and I touched the person’s hand. Shock coursed through my body as I realized something. The voices, they were gone, I was hearing only one thing, something I hadn’t heard in a very long time. It was my own voice, my thoughts, it was amazing! I quickly stood up embracing this person and I could feel it, the comfort I had with this person. Everything else melted away, my past, my enemies, everything. I could finally start anew.
