I couldn't think of a title for it.

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If I could, I would sing you a song,
But I know I’d get it all wrong.
I never could get my words perfect,
Nor could I ever be so direct.

Besides, songs aren’t my artistic style,
But I’d do just about anything to see you smile.
You make my heart pound like a song’s bass
Which, in a way, has me frozen in place.

I can’t remember the last time I felt this way;
Oh, but I know I’ll remember this day.
You know all of the words to say that make me blush,
And I guess that’s why you give me such a rush.

So say that you'll always be
The perfect blend with harmony
To the tale that was deep and untold;
Flick of the pen for these two souls.
Ever since you went away, my heart has never beat the same and all that I can do is just laugh.




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I really liked this poem =) It flowed easily and showed emotion. Plus, this is the first piece of work I've read since I created an account, haha.
~~Find out the reason that commands you to write; see whether it has spread its roots into the very depth of your heart; confess to yourself you would have to die if you were forbidden to write. ~Rainer Maria Rilke~~




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I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has very good flow and emotion. as for a name theres multiple things that it could be.

My True Love
The Way I Love You
Perfect Harmony

the list is endless :)

Good Work,

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I enjoyed this poem. Its a bit too happy for my taste,
but I enjoyed it anyways. (: It flowed nicely, and you rhymed almost perfectlly.
I really hope you keep writing, dont doubt yourself.
-KAT




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This was really good, good work. As for a name, if you can't think of one then let it be vague and let it be called "a thought" or some equally vague title or use the date you wrote it or the date you wrote about.
There's no rain there's no me, I'm tellin' ya man sure as shit. - From Poem by Jack Kerouac



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