"Roller-Coaster" (A Dynamite by Taio Cruz PARODY)

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Roller Coaster (A Dynamite by Taio Cruz Parody)

Verse 1:
I came to ride, ride, ride, ride,

I got there early so

I could slide, slide, slide, slide,

So I could get right through the line, line, line, line

Then I get the spot that's mine, mine, mine, mine

Yeah, yeah.

And then we go, we go, we go,

And it goes, it goes, it goes,


Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,

Screaming "Aaa-ah

Gotta throw up."

The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,

Screaming "Aaa-ah

Gotta throw up."

Cause we gonna turn which way,

We gonna flip all night,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster,

Cause I told you once,

That this ride is fierce,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster.


Verse 2:
I sorta feel, feel, feel, feeel,

Like I'm gonna puke my meal, meal, meal, meal,

I really don't want to, to, to, to,

But I lean over and do, do, do, do,

Yeah, Yeah,

And we still go, we go, we go,

And it goes, it goes, it goes,


Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,

Screaming "Aaa-ah

Gotta throw up."

The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,

Screaming "Aaa-ah

Gotta throw up."

Cause we gonna turn which way,

We gonna flip all night,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster,

Cause I told you once,

That this ride is fierce,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster.


Bridge:
Even though I feel sick,

And I don't feel quite like standing,

I love this coaster,

And I don't want it to be landing,

Cause I, I, I, feel free

And I, I, I, love to be,

Love to be,

So I'm gonna keep my hands in the air,

My hands in the air,

Put your hands in the air.


Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,

Screaming "Aaa-ah

Gotta throw up."

The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,

Screaming "Aaa-ah

Gotta throw up."

Cause we gonna turn which way,

We gonna flip all night,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster,

Cause I told you once,

That this ride is fierce,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster.

It's a roller coaster


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loool It's pretty good ! I think it's funny =)




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JaneThermopolis wrote:Roller Coaster (A Dynamite by Taio Cruz Parody)



Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,

Screaming "Aaa-ah, Needs a comma

Gotta throw up.!"That might have worked better there

The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,

Screaming "Aaa-ah,comma again

Gotta throw up.!" Exclaimation mark again

Cause we gonna turn which way,

We gonna flip all night,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster ride, flows better when listening to the music

Cause I told you once,

That this ride is fierce,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster ride.


Verse 2:
I sorta feel, feel, feel, feeel,

Like I'm gonna puke my meal, meal, meal, meal,um... this kinda felt weird to read but still works!

I really don't want to, to, to, to,

But I lean over and do, do, do, do,

Yeah, Yeah,

And we still go, we go, we go,

And it goes, it goes, it goes,


Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,

Screaming "Aaa-ah,Comma

Gotta throw up.!"Exclaimation mark

The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,

Screaming "Aaa-ah,

Gotta throw up.!"

Cause we gonna turn which way,

We gonna flip all night,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster ride,

Cause I told you once,

That this ride is fierce,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster ride.



Chorus:
I put my hands up when I'm on this ride,

Screaming "Aaa-ah, commas are your friend

Gotta throw up.!"

The downward plunge makes my stomach cry,

Screaming "Aaa-ah,

Gotta throw up.!"

Cause we gonna turn which way,

We gonna flip all night,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster ride,

Cause I told you once,

That this ride is fierce,

Our heads will explode,

It's a roller coaster ride.

It's a roller coaster


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I liked this! I laughed so hard I got complaints from the neighbors for being so loud! And it fits with the music almost perfectly! *Hits like* Keep writing!
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Hey! This was a really fantastic parody! I love this song and I think that the concept went with it very well.

Any who, a couple of things...

The line "it's a roller coaster", has one too many syllables, I think. I know allmixedup gave you an idea, but I thought I would share one too. I would change it to just "it's a coaster ride" or take out the "it's" and make it just "roller coaster ride". That way the song wouldn't feel forced and would floooow.

I would go back again and read-through it once because a couple lines (in the verses) have one word extra or need one more word to make the rapping-ness sound right. And I don't mean with the repetitive words. I mean in the other parts of the verses. Sorry, if that didn't make sense...

My favorite lines were the beginning of the second verse with the feel/meal rhyme. And of course the AAA--aahhh lines. It made me laugh thinking of singing and rapping and then all of a sudden AHAHAAAHHHH!! Yep, fantastic job! :)
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i laughed so hard at this LOL!
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Bravo Bravo! *Clap Clap Clap*
I laughed at this so hard! I even tried singing to the real song and it's HA-larious!
Keep making more songs please, then maybe you should record them, then I'd download them onto my I-POD =]
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JaneThermopolis wrote:Like I'm gonna puke my meal, meal, meal, meal,

I really don't want to, to, to, to,

But I lean over and do, do, do, do,

That part was hilarious. I like this a lot! It's cute and funny. *clicks "like" button over and over again then sees "error." *
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I really liked this. It made me smile, I dont know how to review parodies so I'm just going to leave it at that.

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Featured! :)
Apple of my soul,
Eats me whole,
Take one bite,
No delight,
Rotting hole.



The universe will reward you for taking risks on its behalf.
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