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Light and Darkness

greenwitch94 · 2010-07-21T03:42:53Z

Many, many years ago a tail of the forces of Light and Darkness began. It starts at the begining of time. There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage, his name was Darkness, but we know him as Evil. He oozed tendrils of unimaginable evil, he was often mistaken as Light because he shown like a star. With Darkness came his twin brother Light. Light was kind and told of heros who would come to earth and send back the evil that came from Darkness. Also like his brother he was often mistaken, for he slightly glowed like a night sky full of stars. They fought over the world and who would control it. There were wars that lasted decades, there was rageing storms and terrible droughts. Then us humans made it worse, we came and they just ramed us over covering the earth in a veil of blood that soaked into the ground and grew and destroyed plants and animals of varius sorts. Then one day the Bulls stood on either sides of the earth and ramed their mighty horns together and created divine beings kown as Gods and Goddess. They were given a choice to stand with Darkness or Light, and with the sides that they chose they got powers that no human could ever posess. Yet the wars rained on and evolution took its tole on the Bulls and what little battle fields they have now are forests and bay areas near land, and slowly the Gods, Goddess, and humans abandend the Bulls and left them to their never ending war. Then one of the Goddess took the side of Light and started fighting along side the Black Bull. Her name was Nyx, Goddess of night, mercy and compassion. Her move changed the world for a couple of decades before the other Gods and Goddess took up their places, again they chose to be on the side of Light or Darkness. The war still continues, and they will allways be there, raming their horns,casting their spells and throwing their spears. All's we can do is wait for the fall of one of the Great Bulls, and no matter wich bull wins, the world will forever be changed. It's or choice, however, to deside if we will stand with the White Bull and fight for the Darkness, or stand with the Black Bull and fight for the Light. Which will you choose?, or have you already chosen?

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Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:22 pm

DemiGodsRule12 says... · Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:22 pm

Interesting. I liked how you put the form of Light and Darkness into Bulls. Original and really cool. I give you mega poits for being orirginal. Spelling mistakes here and there caught me, but overall it was a great piece of work.
"Her name was Nyx, Goddess of night, mercy, and compassion."
^^^ Explain her more. Please. I couldn't figure out what kindof goddess she was. Is she pretty, powerful, or both? I also couldn't relate to any characters in your work. Sorry, but I really couldn't.
Overall I liked it. I also liked how you ended it with a question.

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Mon Oct 04, 2010 7:42 pm

IIWickedDestinyII says... · Mon Oct 04, 2010 7:42 pm

greenwitch94 wrote: It started at the beginning of time.

There was a white bull, so full of hatred and rage. His name was Darkness, but we know him as Evil. They fought over the world and who would control it. There were wars that lasted decades, there was rageing storms and terrible droughts.

There were only a few grammar mistakes that I found. Thumbs up

. The writing was good and I think you have a lot of potenital. You may want to explain Nyx more, so we can understand what she is like or looks like

. I liked your concluding sentence, it makes you think. In the end it was a good piece of work. Keep writing

. Hope to see more of your work

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