A Time of Change

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Winter breeze wraps 'round
Autumn trees as cold air sweeps
Up yesterdays leaves.
Last edited by Nameless_And_Shamed on Sun Jan 08, 2006 6:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Another good haiku. Good idea at least, but your first line is 6 syllables long.
@(^_^)@
Got YWS?




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Oh, thanks.
I think I fixed it right.



For according to the trollish philosopher Plateau, "if you wants to understan' an enemy, you gotta walk a mile in his shoes. Den, if he's still your enemy, at least you're a mile away and he's got no shoes."
— A Blink of the Screen by Terry Pratchett