I will reveiw any work! (No rating limitation) (open again)

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I can only review 15 right now, but will be able to do more later. The first ten that gets posted will be the first to get reviewed.

I will not:
Check your grammar and correct it. Why? I think you should check your own grammar. Anyway I would end up telling you something that is probably incorrect.
Write long reviews. You should expect 1-3 paragraphs, depending on the quality of the work.
Review unreadable works.

I will:
Be critical. I wont ease up, but I won't be mean. There's a difference between being honest and plain out mean.
Tell you how strong your characters are and aren't.
Tell you about your plot and your voice.
Review the first three chapters to your novel. If I like it, i will continue.
Last edited by spiderman on Mon Jun 20, 2011 12:43 pm, edited 3 times in total.
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775 :) have a great review
Happiness is a perfume you can not pour on others without getting a few drops on yourself <3




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Done :). Next!
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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I still need to reveiw 14 more.
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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C'mon guys. I haven't reveiwed much yet :( .
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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Could you please review a scene or two from my novella? It would be much appreciated.

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"wub wub wub wub. Now Zoidberg is the popular one."

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post740898.html#p740898 please :)
If I die young
bury me in satin
lay me down on a bed of roses
sink me in the river, at dawn
send me away with the words of a love song
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Reveied yours Emalily. Great poem. I also did yours Prosithion.Lei è stato perfetto!
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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dude, awesome crit! *bows* Thank you so much.
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I forgot im supposed to do scene two.... :( Srry i'l get right to it>
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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I was wondering if you could take a look at the prologue and first chapter in my novel?
Here are the links:

Prologue

Chapter 1

Many thanks in advance! :D
Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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Would you review my poem? topic67459.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.





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Done. Were open again. :smt001
Despite the lies that you're making
Your love is mine for the taking
My love is just waiting
To clothe you in crimson roses

WHISPERS IN THE DARK LYRICS - SKILLET




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Heya, wanna review my new work (Wish it Was a) Fairytale? Pleeaaaaaaaase? :smt028

Thanks!
Alzora
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Hi! I'd really appreciate it if you could review a few parts of my novel in historical fiction called 'softness of doves'. Could you start with the prologue, please? Thank-you so much! I look forward to your review (s)!
~ Alia



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What is a poet? An unhappy person who hides deep anguish in his heart, but whose lips are so formed that when the sigh and cry pass through them, it sounds like lovely music.
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