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Sorry :/
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I love this Piece! It flows throughout the poem, but try to use more punctuation. (:

--Hope(:




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hello my name is James!
I adore nature poems basically because they are really soothing for my mind and you'rs really hit the spot. hahah. anyway i really like the point of the poem and that is natural water. you should have written more i think i can see you'r power of observations.
if you have any quaries about my review
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In the winter months, snowstorms and rainfall in the Patagonian Ice Fields can drastically affect the landscape. Worsened by heavy winds, such storms can reduce visibility and lead to glacial calving, ice collapses, and avalanches. During these conditions, travel is not advised.
— The Documentarian