[rapped or sung fast]
where’s the originality
all I see is profanity
just ‘cause you moma
is fat like a manatee
doesn’t mean-
you gotta fuck with me
or gotta fuck with them
haha how’s it feel
I just slammed yo mum
but its nothing compared
to the words you drum
you laugh and ya shout
endless with this
continuous bitching
im sick of stitching
that I place in your people
because they are bleeding
chorus [sung]
sooo where’s your, aspiration
or, this, inspiration
for your words
for your knives
is someone hurting, lil Ben
make him feel so low again
your so pathetic-
now the countless times
where I stick these rhymes
they may sound whatever
but they have meaning
all im trying to say is
the people that love you
GOD they are bleeding
why are you so demeaning!
I mean the girl who loved you
the one that was there for you
you bitch on her back
the attitude you have!
It’s just fucking cack!!
chorus[sung]
now sorry for my words
of hate and them cursing
but I’ve travelled the herds
of teens and their crews
and none is a dick
LIKE YOU!
so what am I saying
nothing in honesty
just plain ol’bitching
‘cause trying to change you
is like working in hells kitchen
the world is on fire
the metal is flying
so are the curses…
hey ! I ain’t frying
while I am trying
to change a guy
who’s brain is twisted
and heart is dead
chorus.
where’s the originality
all I see is profanity
just ‘cause you moma
is fat like a manatee
doesn’t mean-
you gotta fuck with me
or gotta fuck with them
haha how’s it feel
I just slammed yo mum
but its nothing compared
to the words you drum
you laugh and ya shout
endless with this
continuous bitching
im sick of stitching
that I place in your people
because they are bleeding
chorus [sung]
sooo where’s your, aspiration
or, this, inspiration
for your words
for your knives
is someone hurting, lil Ben
make him feel so low again
your so pathetic-
now the countless times
where I stick these rhymes
they may sound whatever
but they have meaning
all im trying to say is
the people that love you
GOD they are bleeding
why are you so demeaning!
I mean the girl who loved you
the one that was there for you
you bitch on her back
the attitude you have!
It’s just fucking cack!!
chorus[sung]
now sorry for my words
of hate and them cursing
but I’ve travelled the herds
of teens and their crews
and none is a dick
LIKE YOU!
so what am I saying
nothing in honesty
just plain ol’bitching
‘cause trying to change you
is like working in hells kitchen
the world is on fire
the metal is flying
so are the curses…
hey ! I ain’t frying
while I am trying
to change a guy
who’s brain is twisted
and heart is dead
chorus.
.Well keep writing. Oh and one more thing! You did better with punctuation this time. Well until next time.
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