A Teenage Life (DEAD!)

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Okay, don't mean to interrupt, but I added another rule. I would appreciate it if you would all follow it because it's getting a little hard for people to keep up with everything. Only make two posts a day, at most, please. I know you might not like that, but that is one of the normal YWS storybook rules, okay? So please, you all need to follow it.

Please and Thank You,
Fox
I am a fox, sly and quick.
I never give up
I never quit

I do what I can
I stand and fight

I strategize
I stand tall
throughout the night

I am a fox




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We are trying to not let your story die because noone is really posting so it was just that we all who are posting think this story could go a long way. Exspecially me if people would start posting besides just the few who are.

~brittany~
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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I know...fine. If no one is posting, then you can post 3 a day, only to keep it going. Is that okay??? The reason for people not posting as much may be because they can't keep up. I have gotten requests to give the posts a limit, and I intend to do so. However, I don't want this to die, so I think 3 a day will work. ONLY until people start posting more, then it goes back to 2. Are you good with that???
I am a fox, sly and quick.
I never give up
I never quit

I do what I can
I stand and fight

I strategize
I stand tall
throughout the night

I am a fox




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Lol ok i am fine with that, but i just really hope we can get this story moving along.
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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Same here. I don't want this to end, so let's continue! :D

By the way, I'm afraid I'm dropping out for just that reason. It was too hard for me to keep up. Sorry, but you can still use Sam in your posts.
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I am a fox, sly and quick.
I never give up
I never quit

I do what I can
I stand and fight

I strategize
I stand tall
throughout the night

I am a fox




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I'm having trouble getting Domenica in here. Can someone help me?
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~Katrina(Kat)~

The sky was getting darker by the minuete. I picked up the soccer ball, and went back to the bench. I drank the rest of the water, and put the botle back in my bag. I felt like someone was behind me, so I turned around. Domenica was walking towards me. I smiled.

"Hey." She said, now right infront of me.

"Hey." I said with a big smile, She was the first girl who had talked to me that didn't hate me for some reason.




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Brayden

After Andrew and I got done with the mall we went by Sam's house to see what he was up to, right when we got there he ran outside and got in my car so I just took off and went to the park so we could hang out.
"Whats been going on my brothers?" Sam asked.
I looked at him and laughed but didnt reply because something in my gut just wouldnt let me tell them about our friend I was dying to get with and besides I couldnt risk our friendship in any way possible.
Andrew shook his head,"nothing bro just hanging around at my house,the ususal lately." Then we all just sat there sorta speechless like we had something to hide.





Sorry it was so short :(
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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Fire
I jumped up and got dressed in a black long sleeved shirt and black jeans. I pulled on a black sweatshirt and converse and grabbed my Ipod. I whistled to Ace and he jumped up and ran out after me. I ran downstairs where mom was reading a novel. "Mom can I go out?" I asked quietly. She looked up and smiled her black hair with a shock of white in it falling slightly into her face. 'Of course sweetheart." She said smiling at me. I smiled back and hugged her. I grabbed my car keys and walked into the garage. I walked over to my black Jaguar I drove to the park and got out of the car. I walked into the park and sat on a park bench. I heard a few voices that I recogonized as Sam's Brayden and Andrew. From the sound of it they were right behind me. Ace sat next to me and put his head on my lap. I petted him and sang " Swallowed up in the sound of my screaming
Cannot cease for the fear of silent nights
Oh how I long for the deep sleep dreaming
The goddess of imaginary light

In my field of paper flowers
And candy clouds of lullaby
I lie inside myself for hours
And watch my purple sky fly over me

I linger in the doorway
Of alarm clock screaming
Monsters calling my name
Let me stay
Where the wind will whisper to me
Where the raindrops
As they're falling tell a story

If you need to leave the world you live in
Lay your head down and stay a while
Though you may not remember dreaming
Something waits for you to breathe again

In my field of paper flowers
And candy clouds of lullaby
I lie inside myself for hours
And watch my purple sky fly over me." I looked up at the sky and watched the moon again breathing evenly the crisp night air.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."




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Brayden

While I was talking to my two friends Sam and Andrew I heard a girl singing,it sounded like she was not to far infront of us so I looked up and it was Fire. I listened to her sing for like 2 minutes and then I walked up behind her and jumped at her,"Boo," I yelled. she screamed and the next thing I know I was on the ground and she was ontop of me,"Oh my god,Brayden you almost got beat to death,reflexes you know!"
I jumped up still laughing even though I think she almost busted my nose,"Girl you know how to fight,I'd hate to see anyone fight you." She blushed a little and smiled. Then Sam and Andrew came rushing over but by the time they reached to where I layed I was already up, Sam was laughing then he looked at Fire and said,"Nice one," then laughed a little bit more til he almost couldnt breathe.
Andrew just looked to stunned to see that a girl could do that because he thought most of the girls at our school was all girly girl and couldnt fight but then he yelled,"Awesome,You are one good fighter to bring down Breydon that fast," then he laughed along with Sam.
Fire looked at Sam and Andrew as they layed on the ground still laughing at something that wasnt even really that funny but they seemed to get a kick out of it so she just let them laugh it out til she finally couldnt take it then she slapped both of them in the face,"Enough is enough yall,its not that funny." Then she walked away.



By the way she slapped them in the face to get them to stop laughing,not trying to be mean.
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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Fire
I walked away a smile on my face as Ace trotted behind me. He grabbed my sweatshirt sleeve and tugged at it gently. I looked at him and then he turned around and tackled Brayden and started to lick his face like mad. I ran up to him and laughed happily. "Ace off." I said sternly. Brayden just sat there with a WTF! expression on his face. "You should be honored the only other person who got a reaction like that was Seth." I said quietly Seth's name making my eyes well up with tears and one of them slipped down my cheek. I looked away and wiped it away and turned back.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."




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Brayden

While the others sat there still in shock of what just happened I got up and ran over to where Fire was,"Fire,dont cry,are you ok?"
She looked at me then said,"Oh yes Brayden it totally looks like im ok,Do you know how to help anybody lately?" I just watched as she continued to cry then i hugged her tightly while she began to cry even more,I wispered,"everything is gonna be ok I promise,it just takes time,"then i kept hugging her til it sounded like she stopped crying.
Sam walked over to us and hugged Fire,without a word but he didnt let go til about 5 minutes later,Andrew also walked over to hug her but none of them said a word but,"Im sorry," then they both walked away and got in my car. When they started walking to my car I walked a little ways down the road with her and Ace feeling sorry for her loss so I started a new conversation,"how did you like the starting of school?" but she never replied, she just looked at me with all the pain in her eyes,I didnt know what to do.
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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Fire
I just looked at Brayden my perfect control in tatters around me. I knew my pain was horribly clear but maybe it was time for it to be. No one knew how much I hurt everyday. I just stared as Brayden walked away and then just walked to my car I drove home and ran up to my room locking my door. I tried to call him but no answer. I heard the phone ring a few times but I just ignored it. I turned up my stereo and turned up Evanescence singing along with every song feeling myself smile music took away the pain at least for a while and helped me cope. I would have died long ago with out music. I pulled out my sketchpad and a black haired girl with black angel wings crying over a grave holding a black rose.
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"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."




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Brayden

Looking at Fire made tears come to my eyes,it was really sad to me because after all i am cursed with sensitivity and it sucked alot. While she kept looking at me I slowly walked away but before I completely left her standing there I turned around and said,"Im sorry,I just gotta go home and get some rest so I hope you understand..and im really sorry for all your pain." Then I walked all the way back to my car in silence,went and dropped everyone where they wanted to go,then finally went home and layed in my bed til I finally fell asleep.
Around 3a.m. I got a call from Fire so I hurried up to answer it,but by the time I opened my phone up to answer it I already missed the call. I kept calling and calling her back but after the 5th time I just gave up because she was probably just gonna ignore me now anyways because she probably thinks I dont wanna talk to her,I finally fell back asleep after #o mins of thinking how bad Fire must feel. I had my mind set to go and take her out to some places tomorrow to give her a load off to where she can finally forget about the pain and see how it is to finally be happy and free again.
The truth will come out baby, and you'll be the only one lost in the dark >:)




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Fire
I woke up to my mom knocking lightly at my bedroom door. I got up and opened it. "Yeah mom?" I asked quietly. "There's a boy here to see you a Brayden." She said slyly. My eyes widened and I stared at her in disbelief. "I'll tell him you'll be right down." She said in a sing song voice. I closed the door and immediatly grabbed a lightweight long sleeved crimson v neck shirt with black roses going up the side. I pulled it on and put on black skinny jeans and my favorite black converse with red laces. I put on black eyeliner just enough to make my eyes pop and put on holly red lipstick. I brushed my once shoulder length hair now to the middle of my back. I grabbed my Ipod and sketchpad and pencils. I walked downstairs nervous as hell and curious to.
"You are without a doubt, the worst pirate I've ever heard of."

"But you have heard of me."



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