The Parable

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A single rose loomed amongst weeds:
A bloody head, shading pygmy
greens.
A creature climbs the rose-stem,
struggles, then slides down into
the mire.


A fatted antelope grazes,
fowl beasts lying, preparing
to kill.
The fittest eat, others snarl, drooling,
waiting for skeletal remains
to come.


A rich fat-cat prances in suits:
his tailored tie, died red, with blood
of men.
Workers look in plain jealousy,
bitterness, while grinding their bones
to dust.

All the world’s servants are on ladders of rank,
some are rosy, most are dank.
Previously known as "Phorcys"
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The indenting went a bit off but you get the idea.
Previously known as "Phorcys"
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Awesome subject, and very nice details. It feels like it rhymes when in actuality it doesn't always. It has a very good rhythm, though the meaning can be sketchy, maybe on purpose.

:Jeanette:
If you held the world in your hands,
What would you change first?
Would you change the format, change the plans?
Or leave it be in the universe?
:Jeanette:



A true poet does not bother to be poetical. Nor does a nursery gardener scent his roses.
— Jean Cocteau