Ten

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Have you realised that ten is our number?
We were born with it in our hand
But you can adopt it with your mystery.
You see the fun…you see the thrill
DON’T BURST
It's hard, I know you will
But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.




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Hello there
This is a thought provoking poem indeed and I liked it...how it leaves me in a world of thought. This is true and creative :)
The last three lines

But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.

They are well written.
Good job.
The best is what you make it!

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TheUnknownPoet wrote:Have you realised that ten is our number?
We were born with it in our hand
But you can adopt it with your mystery.
You see the fun…you see the thrill
DON’T BURST
It's hard, I know you will
But just to inform you. We saw. We came. We ha-
-ve no hypotheses.
Shame. Nonsense poems are perfect: nearly.


hello, unknown poet.

nonsense poems are perfect: nearly

definitely agree with this.

-telle.
You've got the key to my heart..but have you forgotten about a duplicate?
Sorry. I've already given it to someone else.



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