Hi... <3

An extrovert and spontaneous 14 year old girl that meets a boy in a crazy and freaking way. After that they started communicating by the internet and then they got to see each other again in a summer camp.

**EDIT: What happened to your story?**
Hi there, Sol.
Welcome to YWS, by the way! I can see you are a new member. I hope you're liking it here. Don't forget, for every piece of work you post, try to review at least three other pieces of works, so that way everyone's stuff gets the constructive criticism it needs! (:
Anyways. Before I review the overall story, some nitpicks of mine are:
1.) Your punctuation. "Okay......."--no, we don't do that in writing. "Okay..." is more like it. Excessive dot-dot-dot's annoys the heck out of me, and other writers, as well.
2.) Your quotations. You didn't always do punctuation right when you worked with quotations. For example--
"I am hungry" she said. <-----That's what you would do.
"I am hungry," she said. <----Way it should be.\
3.) Excessive punctuation...you don't need all the "!!??!" It's quite clearly expressed with just a "!" or "?" or even a "?!". But please, oh please, do not use it excessively.
Now, on to your overall plot. This seemed like a bunch of rambling to me. It didn't have meaning, and it definitely just sounded like a third grader writing. You need to use your writer's voice, Sol. It gives the story character. Plus, I don't get the whole "fairy godmother" thing! It's just sort of weird. This story just didn't capture me.
You need to add interest, and you need to SHOW not TELL! It's one of the most important things in writing.
You'll get there. If you need any help with your plot, or just writing in general, feel free to PM me. I'm always happy to help.
Have a good day. Toodles!
-Mizz