Love (not long at all, kind of random...)

Yeah, just thought this one up really quickly. You know, just thinking about something totally random and all of a sudden *POW* this stupid thing comes in my head! Sounds more like something you would see on a post card

Some love is deep,
Some love is sweet,
Some love is kind,
And some love is hard to find,
But only true love is where you can get in the worst of fights and still be able to stand the sight of each other



Just thought I'd share that with you! You don't have to edit it or anything, just wanted to put it out there.

I like it, :] I want to edit this, he he, so here is some tips. Some love is repeated in every line, so this would sound much better....^.^
Some love is deep,
Sweet,
Kind,
Hard to find...


(And the the last line was very nice, though a bit longgg, but still, NICE! D

It's cute and simple, and beautiful. Nice work Hearty;]
~Skyy.

Despite the ending being relatively long to the rest of the poem, I would not change a thing. What I liked, perhaps the most, was the driving theme of 'love' throughout this poem. The poem started kind of like as you said, "something you would see on a post card," yet the conclusion, and the length of it has something to do with this assumption, but the conclusion is very unique and adds a nice flair to the entire composition. Overall a very good job.

Sincerely,
-Elitehusky

It was actually really cute! There are too many poems that are taken too seriously and this one is pretty and fun and it's absolutely perfect. Because it says exactly what it's supposed to say. Don't change it!! xx

iheartbooks wrote:Some love is deep,
Some love is sweet,
Some love is kind,
And some love is hard to find,
But only true love is where you can get in the worst of fights and still be able to stand the sight of each other

Hello!

So I have read your poem, and I am amazed of how you quickly thought it up. It's simple, short, and cute. I know you don't want to change it, which is good because it's already nice.

Keep it up!

-darkangel_05

Aoow, how sweet, I liked it very much, though maybe the last line was a bit too long, maybe you could somehow split it up in two... otherwise, good work for being just a quick thought! ^^ // Hugs and Hearts from Sagaa

Sometimes the thought of the moment is the truth at its basic. And this would be such a thought!