Mannequin

The re-edited one I like a alot better, but the first one I thought was still good. I agree with Galatea though and all her nitpicks, escpeshily the one wear she changed "Daddy's plastic" to "Mothers Money" for some reason I didn't really get "Daddy's plastic" at first, even though it is kind of obvious. But still.

Verry good poem, like always!

personally, i like the original version of your poem better, and that version i absolutely loved. it didn't hold a very deep, sensual meaning, but for that i can't complain as the rest of the poem was utterly wonderful. um...no critiques here. [/i]