My Characters- Story

I haven't been on in a while... so I hope to get back on the YWS train by submitting something. I'm writing ANOTHER story in my notebook...and welpp, here are my characters:

From bottom left is Tyler(Tidus) and up, Cleo(Glee) and top left, Kevin(Leon), Madden(evil dude person), Top right..James(Embry), Alexander(Aislin) and bottom right..Abigail... and MIddle is my main character Skye(Violet).
Please comment ! It means alot

First off, I have to say, I really love your style! I love it! It's cartoon-esque, but with shading and proportions! And you got the angles right! Ha, I'm jittery I like this so much. *shivers*

My favorite is Alexander. His eyes are even, his nose is right, lips, ear, eyebrows are all right, shading's good, hair is good... I could go on, but to sum it up, Alexander is near-perfect. The only thing wrong that I see is his dhirt collar, which looks like it's a tube because of the marker.



Now, be warned; when I critique, I point out what keeps things from being perfect. I don't compliment you on your work because whatever I don't point out is perfect, so just take a lack of words as a compliment.

Now to go in order. Tyler. His nose and lips are shoved to the side. The shading on them is fine, but it looks closer to profile view than 3/4 view. Otherwise, he's great.

Cleo. Her eyes aren't even. For me, getting eyes to be even is the hardest thing to do on a face. I don't know if it is or isn't for you, but on Cleo, it really stands out because all the others' eyes are really good. And her mouth is very small. Unrealistically so. Also, though you can't fix this one, her neck is really long. Maybe it's supposed to be this way. I don't know.

Kevin. Nice job on the angle and hair. Only thing I see is that extra little lumps on the tip of his nose. The curve in the line in the middle going down? It doesn't seem to help your cause here.

Madden. He looks like he is thinking, "Yes! Here she is! I've got her in my clutches, now." So good job on making him looks evil. His collar seems to be going onto his jaw on the left side, but that's it.

James. This is the best shading and coloring of them all. His shirt seems a little off, but that's it.

Abigail. You can tell the pencil marks for when you colored her. What's annoying the heck out of me is that I can't tell her skin tone. I amuse myself by trying to guess people's cultural heritage (not meant to be insulting, whoever reads this), and I can't blooming figure her out. But other than her coloring, she's really good.

Skye. Her mouth is too small, like Cleo's. Otherwise, she's good. Really nice job on her shirt.

Other stuff:
Are James and Abigail supposed to have red eyes?. I'm just noting this because I was staring at James and went, "Hold the presses, his eyes are red."



Overall:

This is really good. I'm so jealous, because you can do men's hair well, compared to the clown wigs I make my drawings wear. The clothes are really good. And I love how you laid it all out! I looks great, and really 3-D. I'm really, very jealous of your skills.

These are awesome, to the point where I can't find words.

Keep on drawing!

Very nice! Your style is beautiful. My least favorite out of them was James. The angle of his head makes it look like he has a huge double chin, which I don't think he does. My favorites are your very middle one and Alexander. Alex is very life-like, he is by far the best. Your middle one is almost as good, but the angle of her arms is a bit... off. With a bit of tweaking, this will be great!

-Dreamy